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Title: Letting Go
Author: [livejournal.com profile] later2nite
Word Count: 200
A/N: Written a long time ago on Insane Journal for the prompt: Weddings and Funerals.
Thanks, Techgirl, for making me remember it!
A/N 2: You've got to use your imagination with this pic.
Think of it as age-enhanced to the point of Justin being 60 years old and Brian 72.





LETTING GO


Arriving by limo, they file unobtrusively into the church, distinguished gentlemen clad appropriately in dark colors. Time has slowed them down considerably: Brian's knees causing him discomfort most mornings and Justin's eyesight poor.

"I have to attend," Justin had announced over breakfast the morning he'd spotted the obituary in the newspaper.

"Naturally," Brian had agreed, leaning into his husband with a kiss to the side of his face. Some gestures never get old. "We'll go together."

Now he absorbs by osmosis the closure that washes over Justin as they sit listening to the eulogy, shoulders pressed together, staring straight ahead.

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It hits Justin in the gut as he stands at the grave site observing the casket lowering into the earth. The source of his pain, inflicted a lifetime ago and returning to haunt him intermittently as his youth had slipped into advanced age, has been silenced forever.

His hand reaches for Brian's down at their sides, the last clump of dirt thrown onto the pine box by a grieving family member of the deceased. "I'm glad I can't remember," he utters softly into his ear.

"I still can't forget."

Returning to their limo arm in arm, blessed peace has arrived.



THE END
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Date: 2012-03-05 05:47 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] mitakay.livejournal.com
That was emotional and beautiful.
Lovely job.
...and so nice to imagine B/J at this advanced age- still happy together, always there for each other.

Date: 2012-03-05 05:48 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] sjmpets.livejournal.com
Final closure.
Nicely done.

Date: 2012-03-05 06:17 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] toshiani007.livejournal.com
Wonderful, loved it!!!

Date: 2012-03-05 07:12 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] trintiff.livejournal.com
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Very poignant; wonderful drabble!

Hugs, Cindy

Date: 2012-03-05 07:17 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] snapegirlusa.livejournal.com
Wonderfully done, sweetie. Thanks for burring that abusive bigot, and for letting Justin--and Brian--have closure, and the knowledge that they DID survive. ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 07:25 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
So intense and filled with emotion, yet very much IC. I like the age enhanced B/J.
Thank you for sharing, Linda.
*Hugs you tight*
V.

Date: 2012-03-05 07:33 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] techgirl-on-ij.livejournal.com
This is so good, I'm happy I made you remember it:)

I love that Brian and Justin survived and he did not. Lovely drabble

Date: 2012-03-05 07:58 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] yvonnereid.livejournal.com
This is very good hon,very sad too but nice at the same time,because after all this time....our fave boys are still together :)

Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox

Date: 2012-03-05 09:49 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] bumerbmw.livejournal.com
I even teared up at the end!
I doubt that Brian will ever forget what happened to Justin!
and this is beautiful!

Date: 2012-03-05 10:08 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] pam81.livejournal.com
A closure Justin needed.
Really beautiful, sweetie.
It's so good to see them still so close in the future.
Thanks ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 11:54 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] briansbottom.livejournal.com
Very nice. I like the thought of them being together into old age.

Date: 2012-03-06 12:09 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] moonbrightnites.livejournal.com
Fantastic. :)
I absolutely love that photo -- it's one of my favorites of them.

I adore fics where Brian and Justin are much older and there simply aren't enough of them around.

"The source of his pain, inflicted a lifetime ago yet returning to haunt him intermittently while his youth had slipped into advanced age, has been silenced forever." -- Beautiful. ♥

Date: 2012-03-06 05:19 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] meggi63.livejournal.com
Very intense, emotional and finally liberating! *sighs*
Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2012-03-09 12:53 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kinwad.livejournal.com
Loved it, my dear! So very poignant!

Date: 2012-07-22 06:55 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ivylovebj.livejournal.com
It is always my dream,hope them will together forever

because I just believe only them can bring so beautiful life and true love to me in the world,if they can't get over all the rough thing in the life and together,I think no one can and no real love
in the world.

It is very fantastic to image they are together after forty years.

Linda,I love you and your story so much!

Date: 2012-08-10 07:40 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] piksa.livejournal.com
What a lovely drabble. For a while it made me wonder whose funeral it was. Had a few choices. However, the last few lines made it quite clear. So great to see the boys still together and getting some closure.

Date: 2012-08-10 11:22 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] shenova.livejournal.com
Brian always there to support Justin in whatever he needs. Byer bye Hobbs. Nice to see the guys old and together.

Date: 2012-08-11 01:41 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] duffy-60.livejournal.com
I was confused at first whose funeral they were attending, but then the lightbulb went off in the second part of the drabble. Very well done, sweetie!

Date: 2012-08-11 02:09 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] emac66.livejournal.com
.........wow.......i mean.....wow. That was amazingly poignant.

Date: 2012-08-11 02:54 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] toshiani007.livejournal.com
It was beautiful, loved it!!!
Hugs!!!

Date: 2012-08-11 04:25 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] balrogtweety.livejournal.com
This was beautiful and sad. Great work.

Date: 2012-08-11 06:07 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ls1966.livejournal.com
Beautiful and intens, love it ;-)

Date: 2012-08-11 07:42 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] bksbracelet.livejournal.com
Beautiful fic, I bet Brian is a whinging queen about his aging knees lol

Date: 2012-08-11 10:00 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] bloody-mary-666.livejournal.com
So sad, yet (in a twisted way) wonderful at the same time.
Thanks for writing this!

Bloody Mary

Date: 2012-08-11 01:21 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] cheburashka-2.livejournal.com
Sad and lovely.

Cheers,
Vin
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