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Title: Letting Go
Author: [livejournal.com profile] later2nite
Word Count: 200
A/N: Written a long time ago on Insane Journal for the prompt: Weddings and Funerals.
Thanks, Techgirl, for making me remember it!
A/N 2: You've got to use your imagination with this pic.
Think of it as age-enhanced to the point of Justin being 60 years old and Brian 72.





LETTING GO


Arriving by limo, they file unobtrusively into the church, distinguished gentlemen clad appropriately in dark colors. Time has slowed them down considerably: Brian's knees causing him discomfort most mornings and Justin's eyesight poor.

"I have to attend," Justin had announced over breakfast the morning he'd spotted the obituary in the newspaper.

"Naturally," Brian had agreed, leaning into his husband with a kiss to the side of his face. Some gestures never get old. "We'll go together."

Now he absorbs by osmosis the closure that washes over Justin as they sit listening to the eulogy, shoulders pressed together, staring straight ahead.

-----------------------

It hits Justin in the gut as he stands at the grave site observing the casket lowering into the earth. The source of his pain, inflicted a lifetime ago and returning to haunt him intermittently as his youth had slipped into advanced age, has been silenced forever.

His hand reaches for Brian's down at their sides, the last clump of dirt thrown onto the pine box by a grieving family member of the deceased. "I'm glad I can't remember," he utters softly into his ear.

"I still can't forget."

Returning to their limo arm in arm, blessed peace has arrived.



THE END
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Date: 2012-03-05 05:47 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] mitakay.livejournal.com
That was emotional and beautiful.
Lovely job.
...and so nice to imagine B/J at this advanced age- still happy together, always there for each other.

Date: 2012-03-06 03:50 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. I love thinking about them when they're older, too. Glad you enjoyed it. ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 05:48 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] sjmpets.livejournal.com
Final closure.
Nicely done.

Date: 2012-03-06 03:53 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. I thought it was about time they get some closure. Glad you liked it. ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 06:17 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] toshiani007.livejournal.com
Wonderful, loved it!!!

Date: 2012-03-06 03:54 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks, Ani. Makes me happy that you liked it. ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 07:12 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] trintiff.livejournal.com
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Very poignant; wonderful drabble!

Hugs, Cindy

Date: 2012-03-06 03:55 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thank you, Cindy. Glad you liked it.

Hugs ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 07:17 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] snapegirlusa.livejournal.com
Wonderfully done, sweetie. Thanks for burring that abusive bigot, and for letting Justin--and Brian--have closure, and the knowledge that they DID survive. ♥

Date: 2012-03-06 04:02 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. And believe me, it was my pleasure to engineer the demise of this abusive bigot. (great description, BTW) I love imagining Brian and Justin finally at this stage, putting the pain to rest. Glad you enjoyed it. ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 07:25 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
So intense and filled with emotion, yet very much IC. I like the age enhanced B/J.
Thank you for sharing, Linda.
*Hugs you tight*
V.

Date: 2012-03-06 04:06 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks, V. Yeah, the age-enhanced Brian and Justin are really fun to think of. I'm happy that you liked it.

Hugs, ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 07:33 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] techgirl-on-ij.livejournal.com
This is so good, I'm happy I made you remember it:)

I love that Brian and Justin survived and he did not. Lovely drabble

Date: 2012-03-06 04:55 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. Yeah, I had forgotten all about this one until I read yours yesterday. It's so satisfying to ensure the survival of Brian and Justin, and their tormentor?... He's history!!!

Hugs ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 07:58 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] yvonnereid.livejournal.com
This is very good hon,very sad too but nice at the same time,because after all this time....our fave boys are still together :)

Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox

Date: 2012-03-05 08:52 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] minajuy.livejournal.com
that was fantastic, I am often amazed at where fic writers go with there stories, and how they full in the missing gaps,

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Date: 2012-03-05 09:49 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] bumerbmw.livejournal.com
I even teared up at the end!
I doubt that Brian will ever forget what happened to Justin!
and this is beautiful!

Date: 2012-03-06 05:05 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Whoa! I don't think I've ever brought anyone to tears before... Thanks so much for the kind feedback. I'm really happy that you thought it was beautiful. ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 10:08 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] pam81.livejournal.com
A closure Justin needed.
Really beautiful, sweetie.
It's so good to see them still so close in the future.
Thanks ♥

Date: 2012-03-06 05:08 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much, Pam. Glad you enjoyed it. They'll always be this close... my brain can't handle anything else. ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 11:54 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] briansbottom.livejournal.com
Very nice. I like the thought of them being together into old age.

Date: 2012-03-06 05:11 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. The thought of them together into old age is beautiful to me. ♥

Date: 2012-03-06 12:09 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] moonbrightnites.livejournal.com
Fantastic. :)
I absolutely love that photo -- it's one of my favorites of them.

I adore fics where Brian and Justin are much older and there simply aren't enough of them around.

"The source of his pain, inflicted a lifetime ago yet returning to haunt him intermittently while his youth had slipped into advanced age, has been silenced forever." -- Beautiful. ♥

Date: 2012-03-06 05:13 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for the awesome feedback. It's so nice to know how much you enjoyed it. Yeah, this pic is one of my faves also. ♥

Date: 2012-03-06 05:19 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] meggi63.livejournal.com
Very intense, emotional and finally liberating! *sighs*
Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2012-03-06 06:30 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks, Meggi, for the nice feedback. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. ♥

Date: 2012-03-09 12:53 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] kinwad.livejournal.com
Loved it, my dear! So very poignant!

Date: 2012-03-09 04:33 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much, Kin. I'm honored that you read it and left me a comment. That means the world to me. ♥

Date: 2012-07-22 06:55 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ivylovebj.livejournal.com
It is always my dream,hope them will together forever

because I just believe only them can bring so beautiful life and true love to me in the world,if they can't get over all the rough thing in the life and together,I think no one can and no real love
in the world.

It is very fantastic to image they are together after forty years.

Linda,I love you and your story so much!

Date: 2012-07-24 06:39 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, Ivy, for this beautiful comment. I agree with you on everything you said. Brian and Justin together forever equals all that's right with the world. ♥

*hugs you*
Edited Date: 2012-08-10 08:19 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-08-10 07:40 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] piksa.livejournal.com
What a lovely drabble. For a while it made me wonder whose funeral it was. Had a few choices. However, the last few lines made it quite clear. So great to see the boys still together and getting some closure.

Date: 2012-08-10 08:23 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thank you for this nice feedback. ♥ Happy you enjoyed it.

Yeah, I thought it was time for the boys (even if they may be senior citizens now LOL) to close this painful chapter of their lives. They deserve it.

Date: 2012-08-10 11:22 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] shenova.livejournal.com
Brian always there to support Justin in whatever he needs. Byer bye Hobbs. Nice to see the guys old and together.

Date: 2012-08-10 11:32 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Yep - Bye bye, Hobbs. He's history!

I love to think of Brian and Justin together in their senior years, always supporting each other.

Edited Date: 2012-08-10 11:33 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-08-11 01:41 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] duffy-60.livejournal.com
I was confused at first whose funeral they were attending, but then the lightbulb went off in the second part of the drabble. Very well done, sweetie!

Date: 2012-08-11 02:04 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Yeah, it becomes clear in the 2nd half who it is. Thank you for this kind comment. Glad you liked it. ♥

Date: 2012-08-11 02:09 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] emac66.livejournal.com
.........wow.......i mean.....wow. That was amazingly poignant.

Date: 2012-08-11 02:57 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
This comment means so much to me. Thank you for that. ♥

Date: 2012-08-11 02:54 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] toshiani007.livejournal.com
It was beautiful, loved it!!!
Hugs!!!

Date: 2012-08-11 03:00 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Hi, Ani! Thank you so much for this beautiful feedback.

*Hugs* ♥

Date: 2012-08-11 04:25 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] balrogtweety.livejournal.com
This was beautiful and sad. Great work.

Date: 2012-08-11 04:52 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thank you. I agree it was sad. They didn't deserve to have to deal with that pain. I just wanted to bring it to an end, finally.

Date: 2012-08-11 06:07 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ls1966.livejournal.com
Beautiful and intens, love it ;-)

Date: 2012-08-11 06:54 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thank you, Linda. Your comment means so much to me. I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2012-08-11 07:42 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] bksbracelet.livejournal.com
Beautiful fic, I bet Brian is a whinging queen about his aging knees lol

Date: 2012-08-11 08:26 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm sure he doesn't like it one little bit that his knees aren't 29 any longer. LOL

Thanks for this nice feedback. ♥

Date: 2012-08-11 10:00 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] bloody-mary-666.livejournal.com
So sad, yet (in a twisted way) wonderful at the same time.
Thanks for writing this!

Bloody Mary

Date: 2012-08-11 10:52 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Yeah, I agree it's sad. But I'm happy you thought it was wonderful also. Thanks for this kind comment. ♥

Date: 2012-08-11 01:21 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] cheburashka-2.livejournal.com
Sad and lovely.

Cheers,
Vin

Date: 2012-08-11 10:54 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
I agree it's sad, but I'm happy you thought it was lovely. Thanks for this kind comment.

See you soon! ♥
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