later2nite: (jus and gus)
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Title: Justin's Gift Of Gab
Author: [livejournal.com profile] later2nite
Word Count: 300





"Gus Peterson's parents? Follow me, please." The emergency room nurse nods with practiced professionalism, leading Lindsey and Brian down a long, cold corridor to their broken son.

"We've set his fractured femur and tended to the abrasions, but it's the bump on his head that concerns me." Gus's attending physician speaks briskly and doesn't mince words. "I need him to stay awake for the next twenty-four hours," he says, "maybe even longer."

Thanking the doctor, the boy's parents exchange a few worried glances.

"So, Sonny Boy, have I ever told you about the time I got hurt playing soccer?"

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"Mel, I'm so sorry. I was running behind him, holding him up, and then he just took off on his own. He was pedaling so quickly!"

"Justin, don't blame yourself. We certainly don't. It was an unfortunate accident." Taking ahold of his hand, she squeezes it reassuringly. "You're the only one of us who's young enough and fast enough to teach him to ride his new two-wheeler."

"I wish they'd let us in to see him. I'd feel a lot better if I could see him," Justin says uneasily.

"I hear you." Mel's anxious to get some good news.

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Drinking stale vending machine coffee in the emergency room's waiting lounge, Melanie and Justin nervously check the time every ten seconds.

"Lindsey knows we're waiting, itching to find out what's going on. She'll tell us something soon."

"Brian probably never wants to see me again. I bet he holds me responsible for damaging his son. I feel so awful."

"Justin, I told you. Don't go there. It could have happened to any of us. Gus is big now."

"Shit! Here comes Brian. He's gonna kill me!"

"Sunshine, Gus needs you. Start talking to him and don't shut up until tomorrow!"




The End
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Date: 2012-02-26 10:08 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] minajuy.livejournal.com
that last line made me giggle, short but sweet

Date: 2012-02-26 10:20 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Yeah, I figured if anyone could talk non-stop for 24 hours, it would be Justin. Thanks for the nice comment. Glad to make you giggle. ♥

Date: 2012-02-26 10:16 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] marny1.livejournal.com
Poor Gus and poor Justin for worrying so much. But that last sentence ... LOL .

* hugs *

Date: 2012-02-26 10:32 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Happy to make you laugh. Thanks for the sweet comment. ♥

Date: 2012-02-26 10:18 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] pam81.livejournal.com
LOL at the last line.
This was great, Linda ♥ I've really enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2012-02-26 10:38 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks, Pam! Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for the nice comment. ♥

Date: 2012-02-26 10:21 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] shinya-diey.livejournal.com
Nice story. Poor Gus and Justin.
BTW... Last line was a killer ^^

Date: 2012-02-26 11:08 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for the kind words. Glad you liked the last line. ♥

Date: 2012-02-26 10:56 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] toshiani007.livejournal.com
***giggles*** Adorable, loved it!!!
Hugs!!!

Date: 2012-02-26 11:12 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks, Ani! So happy you loved it. ♥

Hugs

Date: 2012-02-26 11:29 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] ladynomad915.livejournal.com
This a very cute and carrying story.

Justin got his proof that brian is not madat him.

Lizzie

Date: 2012-02-27 04:19 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks. Glad you liked it. Yeah, Justin was all worried for nothing. Brian could never be mad at him. ♥

Date: 2012-02-26 11:58 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Great idea! I like how Brian shows Justin he's still one of Gus's fathers, as well as Brian's partner.

Date: 2012-02-27 04:24 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. I was going for that exact effect, so I'm happy it came through. ♥

Date: 2012-02-27 12:02 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] rulisteningbj.livejournal.com
Justin is the perfect man for the job. Funny.

Dee Dee

Date: 2012-02-27 04:35 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks, Dee Dee. ♥ I'm happy you thought it was funny. I'm pretty sure Justin can do the job! LOL

Date: 2012-02-27 01:43 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] techgirl-on-ij.livejournal.com
LOL i've always loved this drabble! Happy you decided to post it here, too.

Hugs

Date: 2012-02-27 04:49 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! I can't believe you remember this one, but you might remember that this was the very first thing I wrote after V.V. was finished and you posted it for me, and I still didn't know how to post anything. You had to talk me through posting this one, step by step, so I could do it myself. I still thank you every day of my life for all the help you've given me on the journals since the day we met in your IJ. You've been so patient with my lack of skills - I always say you deserve a medal for putting up with me!

*Hugs you back like whoa* ♥

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Date: 2012-02-27 02:06 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] britinmanor.livejournal.com
Justin shouldn't have worried, especially if he'd known that Gus had to stay awake for 24 hours...

Perfect set-up. Justin can talk straight for 24 hours, and not drive Brian NUTS :)

Very cute concept, Linda!

Hugs
Cathy

Date: 2012-02-27 04:55 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks, Cathy! I'm happy you liked it. Justin can totally talk for 24 hours straight - and for once, Brian WANTS him to!

Hugs ♥

Date: 2012-02-27 08:47 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] bksbracelet.livejournal.com
Rotflmao so funny so is Brian planning on helping!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2012-02-27 04:01 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
LOL Yeah, I thought it was pretty funny, too. I'm sure Brian will be in the room with them, but he'll no doubt let Justin do most of the talking. Thanks for the sweet comment. ♥

Date: 2012-02-27 03:17 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] moonbrightnites.livejournal.com
I have no problem at all believing that Justin's sweet chatter has healing properties. :)

Nicely done!

Date: 2012-02-27 04:10 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks, Michelle! I'm happy that you liked it. I just thought it was time for Justin's sweet chatter to be put to good use. LOL

Hugs ♥

Date: 2012-02-27 07:06 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] meggi63.livejournal.com
Poor Gus...but it wasn't Justins fault. And Brian for sure will not blame him.
And at last, Justin will be soooo good for Gus...like the last line says. LOL.
Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2012-02-27 07:41 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks, Meggi! I'm so happy that you liked it. Brian doesn't blame Justin at all, deciding to use his gift of gab for some good! LOL

Hugs ♥

Date: 2012-02-28 05:49 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] every1sangel.livejournal.com
This was ADORABLE! I LOVED IT! I can just imagine Brian coming in and saying something so simple when Justin thinks he is going to be destroyed

Date: 2012-02-28 10:24 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. I'm happy that you loved it. Yeah, Brian could never hold Justin responsible for this, but he could definitely take advantage of his gift of gab!

(It was nice chatting with you tonight. ♥)

Date: 2012-02-28 12:19 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] bumerbmw.livejournal.com
ohh my! the last sentence is just perfect! ♥

Date: 2012-02-28 12:26 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks! Makes me so happy that you like it. ♥

And the last sentence? I just thought Justin's 'gift' would be perfect to keep Gus awake. LOL

Date: 2012-02-28 01:38 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] soul1essharpy.livejournal.com
*see icon*

Date: 2012-02-28 03:42 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks! Yeah, I thought it was pretty funny, too. ♥

Date: 2012-02-28 09:48 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] landlady-4rent.livejournal.com
I loved it. Especially, the last line. Too funny!

Date: 2012-02-28 10:02 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! Just a silly little thing, and the end is designed to make you laugh. Glad you liked it. ♥

Date: 2012-07-22 07:03 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ivylovebj.livejournal.com
"Sunshine, Gus needs you. Start talking to him and don't shut up until tomorrow!"

This line is not just say the eloquent of Justin,also Gus loves Justin and Justin loves Gus so much.

How sweet!

Date: 2012-07-24 06:46 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Yeah, Gus and Justin do love each other. I'm sure of it! Thanks for this kind feedback. I'm so happy that you thought it's sweet. ♥

*hugs you*

Date: 2012-08-17 05:44 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
I really loved this one, Linda. IDK why I've missed it the first time you posted it ;)
It's so heartfelt and... IC.
Thank you for that.
*hugs*
V.
Edited Date: 2012-08-17 05:44 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-08-17 11:05 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
I'm just now posting it to all the fic sites. I only posted it to my journal before. Guess it just slipped by you, somehow. LOL

Thanks for the sweet feedback now. I'm happy you liked it.

Hugs

Date: 2012-08-17 08:48 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] aaa-mazing.livejournal.com
LOL Justin should have known better.

Nice job. Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2012-08-17 11:08 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
He worried for nothing. LOL Guess he doesn't realize how very useful his gift of gab can be!

Thanks for your kind words. Glad you liked it.

Date: 2012-08-17 11:11 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] balrogtweety.livejournal.com
This was great. Last line made me snort.

Date: 2012-08-17 11:09 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
LOL Happy to give you a laugh! Thanks for the nice feedback.

Date: 2012-08-17 01:11 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] galenut.livejournal.com
cute story.

Date: 2012-08-17 11:10 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Date: 2012-08-17 02:08 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] toshiani007.livejournal.com
Beautiful, I really loved it!!!
Well done, my dear Linda!!!
Hugs!!!

Date: 2012-08-17 11:11 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, Ani! You're so sweet with your awesome comments.

Hugs

Date: 2012-08-17 02:33 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] 7wildwaysup.livejournal.com
That last line is hysterical; great job... ~ Kathleen

Date: 2012-08-17 11:12 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
LOL Happy to make you laugh! Thanks for the nice feedback.

Date: 2012-08-17 05:26 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] love4movies.livejournal.com
Te he! That was really funny. :D

Date: 2012-08-17 11:14 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
Thanks! Happy you liked it.
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